You Can Get The Knockout

You Can Get The Knockout

A Poem by Commander S.T
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Knockout: Arachnid, 8 Legged, Webs, Venom, Tarantula, Spiders for English we had to write a poem based on our fears. Since my fear is of spiders i could not say the five words listed above

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Cool, Dark, Chaotic

Stairs creaking, Air dry

Hairy, Creepy, Leggy creature

Pinchers, Snappers, Snapping, Pinching

Juices dripping

Bug eating, Labyrinth strung traps sticky like glue

Billions and billions of little visual aids looking demonically at its prey

I was always told that they are more afraid of me than I am of them

© 2012 Commander S.T


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lol, I hate exercises like that, but they are excellent at making you show things and events and people in different and original ways. I'd say you incapsulated your fears with this piece quite well indeed. A tarantula of an experience.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Commander S.T
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Newark , NJ



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