Where's The Umbrella

Rain, Rain go away

Why does love show no way

Rain, Rain go away

Me being nice pushes you away

Rain, Rain back for more

You can't feel that's for sure

Rain, Rain, back for more

It seems as if you heart has no door

Rain, Rain please come back

I think his heart has a crack

Rain, Rain please come back

Maybe his heart isn't all black

Rain, Rain wash me away

because now the pain has went away

Rain, rain wash me away

Now my love is here to stay

Rain, Rain, Rain all day

Because of you he found his way

Sometimes I wish it will rain all day

Reviews

[roarke]

I didn't quite get the double repeat of the refrain lines...

try taking one of the repeated lines out and read it, or replace the second repeated line with something different.

I did a piece on the chicken little story and the phrase, the sky is falling the sky is falling, but I changed it to the sky is melting, the sky is melting....

All in all, a good piece to work with.