Losing You

Losing You

A Poem by Commander S.T

Losing you was hard
The most difficult thing I've done
All of the memorable memories
All the fun
Meeting you was the beginning of a new chapter
Through the heartache and pain
Even the endless laughter
Everything happens for a reason
Is that why you're not here
Losing you is my biggest fear
You built me up
You broke me down
Here everyday
To not being around
What's even worse is you don't know
That losing you hurt the most

© 2014 Commander S.T


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It really hard losing a person brings joy to the table being there in every need. I get it I had 1 best friend in my life he has been gone 9 years it was rough at 1st I died inside too and that put me in a very emotional state. I miss him he was like my dad very rare friend no1 has ever replaced that not even come close to the meaning of the word (friendship)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Losing one is very hard. It was felt in all your words.(Everything happens for a reason) is something I always say:) I liked that in the poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a very thoughtful and emotional poem. You did great at giving a snapshot at how losing someone feels.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Commander S.T

10 Years Ago

thank you, hopefully others can relate as well.

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Commander S.T
Commander S.T

Newark , NJ



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