DOORSTEP TO DARKNESS ...

A Poem by Roy

We are too near for comfort ...

Human!

Lucifer bids thee welcome!

© 2008 Roy

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Christina Harper: Sitti..

Very short, and I'm not sure if I really like this or not because of that. I think I would like to see the images drawn out a bit more. At least into a haiku.

Posted 17 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Cynthia L. Cavett

Ooh, scary! Well written, but it made me sad:( I don't like hell all that much, I've lived in it from time to time already

Posted 17 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Gary H

This gave me the image of a doormat with 'human' written on being stepped upon by the devil.
Best not to question why this image came up. It just did OK.
Did manage a review longer than the poem! Interesting.

Posted 17 Years Ago

4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

Damien Dsoul

One more line and then it'd be a complete Haiku, but other than that ... The tone is sharp and arresting, and made, no doubt, by someone of immense majesty (I can only begin to guess who, but I think I'd leave that one to the poet who composed it), another subtle peice that tends to say more underneath.

Posted 17 Years Ago

4 of 5 people found this review constructive.

Sianna Reader

Hmm, interesting for a short poem. xxxx

Posted 17 Years Ago

4 of 5 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 7, 2008

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Roy

Singapore

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