Estranged ...

I look at your eyes.
A strange sensation ... Leave it.
You won't understand.

Reviews

[Cynthia L. Cavett]

Oooh! Very good! It grabs you and then throws you away, I like it:)

[Annica Nadie]

Very good haiku. And I'm doing very well, thanks; just a bit busy.

[Gary H]

Loved this. Opens up the question of exactly what you do see in someones eyes - and what they see in yours. Intriguing...

[Damien Dsoul]

Subtle with the second line giving a totally ambigous meaning to it. Though I would have preferred if the first line had read: "I look into your eyes". Still enjoyable.

[Shalini R]

sad. but i think its universal.