le Néant ...

le Néant ...

A Poem by Roy
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This is as true as it can get .. I have been struggling for months in succeeding in writing something .. Why something? The word should, in fact, be 'anything' ... And I don't feel particularly better after writing this one ..

"

Another hour's past.
I stare at my writing pad.
She's still a virgin ...

© 2008 Roy


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Seemingly incurable writer's block. It gets us all sometimes. :(

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh this is great! I loved it! Sooooooo true! : )

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i know this feeling all to well.
but why are all inatomit object femal? boats, cars, planes, notebooks, etc.
that was random. whatever, that's as feminazi as i get.



good short feeling.

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

i dont exactly understand it, but its ok.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

LOL, to true, experiencing that myself with my own writing, something so short can have such truth behind it. I loved it my friend. xxx

Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

We all have those moments
I really like the last line!

Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Nice one. :-)

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I don't know the meaning of the title you put in, Roy, but this is such an interesting Haiku you have up here: it's intense and the image in the last line smartly conveys what's already at hand. I've always admired your work for the pristine deftness you tend to apply, and this poem is not exception.

Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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