Amor ...

 

 

The raindrops on the window-pane
Pitter-patter spell out her name
Hush - hush blows the wind
As your mind wanders from Idaho to the Ind :
The mountains, the greens and the oceans beyond,
Hand in hand with the blonde
Who inflicts torture so sweet
On your soul, solely hers,
That you silently pray she continue.

 

And when she locks her lips with yours,
The warm nectar pours
Down your veins,
Allaying your doubts and apprehensions,
Adding a purpose to the John-Doe-life
That you measure out every morn.
And you feel redeemed.

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

The imagery in this piece is very powerful and striking.
"Hush - hush blows the wind" - Such a perfect usage of onomatopoeia here.
"Allaying your doubts and apprehensions," - A very well written line again.
I really enjoyed reading it. Great work!

[Jola]

Poem full of feelings ... I was glad to read it...
Good job !!!

[ighost03]

niice. i really like the hint of pain involved with love. you did really well with it, kudos man

[Pauline Marie Daley]

nice. I love the line Adding a purpose to the John-Doe life. Very thought provoking. Good write.

[fotini]

very sweet and lovely!!!!
the power of love that makes feel so happy and loved!!!!
very nice work!!!!