the knife

a very short thriller

i try 2 see the good in life, 

but how can i with that knife? 

wat ive seen done with it haunts me, 

and how its weilder used it with glee,

 a smile on his face, blood on his face, 

im a disgrace,

im sorry i did this 2 u, now i live with the visions, 

deeply burned in my head, the screaming, 

his gleaming, 

and that knife, with my bloody hands holding it,

 im a piece of sh*t, 

oh well, 

im going 2 hell, 

because of that knife

Author's Note

do not think i look up upon this. just something that came to mind

Reviews

[Kimberly Smith]

WOW! interesting read

[Broken Hearted Faux]

Eesh. Sounds horrorish. But still good. Sad. But good =)

[ducky(:]

You are a brilliant writer. Work on your grammar :P just a tad though, and you have a lot in you that no one knows. Sorta like me...