Magnum (Hit Me as Hard as You Can)

Fight Club, hello? I twisted it a bit to fit my own situation.

Magnum

 

 

You make me scared to open my eyes.

Every move you make reminds me.

You make me scared to close my eyes.

Everything reminds me, everything I see.

Your finger is on the trigger.

And my eyes stare down the barrel of your gun.

Can I blame you for my miserable life?

And forget about all the good you've done?

For a moment I forget about our tragic suicide.

My hand finds yours and our fingers entwine.

Of all the things we've accomplished, this I consider to be great.

I take my eyes off the gun and say, "It's too bad you were my fate."

A cocky smile forms on your face.

Our new beginning has a beautiful taste.

With my finger on your pulse..I was always wrong.

My hand was on the gun all along.

So I contemplate my fear and close my eyes.

You were the best that that ever happened to me, I realize.

I c**k the gun. It shines like a knife.

And I hold your hand tighter as I whisper, "You've met me at a very strange time in my life."

 

-Kate Vegas

January 13^th, '06

 

 

 

©Kate Vegas

Reviews

[Kurt Gargis]

Nice work! God, you gotta love Palahniuk. If you haven't read his other works besides Fight Club, I think you will like them a lot. I suggest "Rant" and "Choke"