Trying to Impress

When all ill ever be,

Is all you'll ever see,

Will that be enough?,

Or will that make it even more tough?,

Will you tell me what a screw up I am?,

If not, then i'll be damn,

I've lived my life trying to impress you,

Mostly because i thought i had too,

But truth be told,

It's getting old,

And your just far too cold.

Reviews

[The DuchessPoet]

Aww... this is nice ... very well penned
Your words:
"Will you tell me what a screw up I am?,
If not, then I'll be damn,
I've lived my life trying to impress you,
Mostly because i thought i had too,
But truth be told,
It's getting old,
And your just far too cold."

Very well done, my talented friend, very well penned!