AWAY

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I looked at you,

 and you looked away

I followed you,

and you walked away

I talked to you,

and you said "NO WAY"

I  gave you my love,

but you gave it all away

Author's Note

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Reviews

[J]

It was short but VERY meaningful.Great work

[John Doeadeer (Pen name..]

what kind of poem is this? it's kind of amazing that you made a poem made up of only one stanza and is still perfect in thought and meter.

[Christopher.Holmberg]

I agree with coyote , this was short though the message shines bright through the selected words. Sometimes i too feel alone , and confused , perhaps thinking the world is crashing down on me. The one thing we can do is press on and learn to forget. Love is tough.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem very much. Sometime it feel like we alone. A excellent poem.
Coyote