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I'm talking to myself

the only one i trust to stay until the end

over and over again

my heart is breaking now

and tears are pouring out no one is listening

to the things that im saying

 

and i

am all alone

nobody understands

why my heart is breaking

and i

want you to know

exactly how i feel

 

open your eyes and see me

wake up and pay attention

listen

listen to me

 

my heart is screaming

loud and clear

my heart is beating

because you are near

notice

notice me

 

i've been a best friend for way too long

i can't wait any more

or i'll be torn apart

for sure

Author's Note

grammer and spelling, please ignore

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

This is really good...it flows really well.
Great Job :)

[Samantha Amber]

this was actually an attempt at a song, i ended up changing the music so much that i just left it as a poem

[Enigma]

WOW!! Now this is 'good'. I've written too many poem just like that still I always feel it it deeply when I read some more poems as such. You seem to be writing about what goes in 'my' head and what all 'I' feel.
I'm saying this because I can very easily realte to your poem.It very clearly describes what you're going through.You pain and eagerness is effectively described here.
I loved it!! GREAT WRITE!!!