Dawn

Dawn is bleeding
Rabid souls, erotic feeding....
The earth now croons
Lost in empty rooms
Time is suddenly dreaming
Hungry eyes scheming
With perpetual days forming
And wild dogs swarming
The nights of autumn awaken
With cool vibrant foliage left shaken...
Nothing left in life to find
Boredom grows within the mind
Weary of some fake divine destiny
Lost and wondering of one's true entity

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

This poem is Awesome, Kimberly...Dark and relentless yet with a profound message of self in its reflections. Lovely. ~Ev

[s y e]

This is great, Kimberly. There is so much meaning and depth to your poem.

Very good.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Ohh nice hehe I really liked this poetess well done :) good write :) thanks for sharing and hope to see more of it