free

Illuminating night sermon
Lurking shadows from the sea
The sky carries this world
With torn flesh of the anointed one
Leading flocks to the shore
A thrust of life sinks deep within
Rain dances along the grass line
The sea casts an unwanted haze
In this world nothing is free
Nor will we ever be

Reviews

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Your form is kind-off addictive,but be aware not to write too many poems in this form :) I followed this one nicely really well done! And wow you have the words swirling around your hands hehe keep it up you have so much potential :) USe it!!! :D

[Neon]

I enjoyed this, you well said, "In this world, nothing's free nor'd be" I love this line.
This's one of the great poem i've read throughout the day!