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Leaves dance in the air
Dreams flowing through her hair
Cool ground. Bright noon
Understanding far too soon
Laughing wildly while others see
Madness shakes near by trees
Sun gleams like waves of fire
Vultures scream with flesh desire
this day is taking me higher
This day is taking me higher
Today I'm dancing on fire
This day is taking me higher

Reviews

[Neon]

Now, let's get it straight, I loved this write and this one is the fav. one write of the day. The Rhyme makes me loving this write much from the heart because the words, the rhyme are well suited with the theme, the concept you penned with the beautiful Imaginary.

I've read your maximum stuffs and I got one thing that your a true lover whose heart's been now broken by a creepy folk and I hate seeing someone as beautiful as you feel sad so, don't sad, pretty! You the one in the world, who makes the world beautiful living!

Keep smiling!

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Interesting piece here!! first of all really mind bobbling heading you got here I found it so addictive hehe Really nice choice in the heading Poetess :) I followed this like sweet addictive imaginary story hehe a real vivid picture!! :) But also sense some real depth in your poem :) Which makes me want to analyze it hehe but not now hehe well done Poetess :) I really liked

[Pax]

oh, a song, the rhythm is smoot and with good rhymes. a intriguing piece!

[Rob Santana]

Hey this piece reads like some lyrics. "Madness shakes near by trees" my favourite stanza.