abandoned

Abandoned beaches
serpant servant mistress
the shaman holds his head in his hands
The tribe is noticing
dogs are hunting
The world's inviting
night is coming
Drag me in
Follow through
Make madness something new

Reviews

[Justin]

that was really good :) :) :) u were able to tell a great story in short form :)

[Blogger]

Mmmmm. Sounds very inviting in a sweet, mystical way.

[Roger Turgeon]

Line 2 did you mean "serpent"?

[Michael K. Evans]

I love how you listed some haunting realities of life. The mood is strangely somber like an all encompassing fog.

[William Tate]

this is an excellent write, very impressive!

[William Tate]

this is an excellent write, very impressive

[William Tate]

this is an excellent write, very impressive

[William Tate]

this is an excellent write, very impressive

[William Tate]

this is an excellent write, very impressive

[William Tate]

this is an excellent write, very impressive