Mirrors Of Unforgiving Faces (NEW)

a poem about the girl I used to be

 It seems now that every step I take,

is just one further away,

from the girl I once was,

feels like I've lost her with everything else that has fallen apart,

and when you find me passed out on my bathroom floor,

please don't call 911,

because I'm afraid I don't know what it is like to be happy anymore.

You can look at me and say you don't know why I hurt,

but you cannot see inside that I am wounded and bleeding,

part of me is missing,

and i don't recognize myself anymore,

all these things,

the girl I use to be would never say.

She would not cry nor shy away,

she'd pick herself up and dust herself off,

but it is for whom I have become,

that does not make that possible,

because she does not have the strength to get up off her knees,

seems they've grown weak,

and she's left here to bleed.

Reviews

[KeeD]

Some days I feel exactly like this^, and I'm not strong enough to admit it or write about it. Thanks for being that strong person that can speak for all of us who've been down, just wanting it to be over with, but when we finally do get on our feet, we're the ones that make people smile. We are human, yet we are different. Well written, inspiring and kudos, good job mate^^

[Kon™]

wow, this piece was filled with alot of emotion, very deep. the flow was great here and it was easy to just keep reading this, it sucked me in. great job with this one, sorrowful, touching, but amazing piece. :)