Letter To Grace

Graceful and clumsy,

beautiful she is,

and every bone in her body is screaming it,

the nauseas feeling I get when I dial the 7th number,

perhaps that's my favorite part,

no,

my favorite part is the loss of breath,

the way she has the ability to make it so hard to breathe,

and the way I can't see straight when she's in my eyesight,

if I could put it all in a letter,

I'd cut open my chest,

pour my heart onto the paper,

and when it was all dried I guess this is what would be left,

at the top of the paper I'd write "letter to Grace",

and at the bottom I'd sign it with X's and O's,

then I would fold it up and put it in a box for her eyes to never see,

because I'm not yet aware of how she would feel,

am I really pouring my heart out,

and is this river running too quickly,

something tells me I fell too quickly,

but perhaps it's the right thing to do.

Author's Note

this is my first draft...reviews?

Reviews

[Jmartins]

This is really good, good JOB!!!

[Jude]

This is pretty good and touching
Great :)