Judgement Day

I was bored.....so i decided to write this.

The shadow falls on the corner of the room,

in the empty house

Golden eyes glint in the pale moonlight,

beauty at first glance, horror at the next.

You see the lies, hate, and blood

Of every life and soul that has done wrong

Every eye that has fallen upon these jewels,

was quickly reminded of its wrong.

As you look into the eyes, to see your wrong,

you begin to wither away, on Judgement Day.

Author's Note

It's my first. I've been told I have a creative mind. I guess I need help learning how to use it.

Reviews

[Leigh]

ily2 dude!
no homo (:

[Allison]

OMGGG! Dude this is frickin awesome 4 ur first write!!!!!!! Don't worry, when u have an account for a longer period of time, things just sort of pop up in ur mind. :) Read other people's work, and that will help ur creative influence A LOT!!! Luv yah! No Homo~!!!