What You Told Me

'l love you'
that's what you told me
'l love you too'
that's what l said

'You are worthless'
that's what you said
'No I'm not'
that's what I said

'l didn't mean it'
that's what you said
'I'm leaving you'
that's what l said

You hit me in the face
I hit you back
You pinned me down
I gave up

You gave me a black eye
I gave you another chance
You broke me apart
Again

Author's Note

Yeah this isn't very good. At least I don't think so. What do you think?

Reviews

[The Cute 1]

wow I'm speechless

[Zack Burton]

I think it's fine. I'm not too thrilled about the concept (I'm hard to impress), but I think the prose works out very nicely. I've read a lot of crappy poetry, and this is not crappy poetry. Keep on churning 'em out.