Story of a Girl

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I am going to tell you the story of a girl
Who stood in front of a mirror every day for hours
Trying to figure out who she is
What she sees is never pretty
She stood there bloody and torn
Not knowing how much more she could take
To her everything seemed pointless
There was no wonderland inside her head
She just kept looking through the glass
wondering if it was to much to ask

Please just break me, make me even more incomplete
I'm so tired of looking at you, and having you look back
at me
I don't desire to live this life anymore
My life has just become a nightmare
You can see through me, oh why can't you hear me scream
Why can't you see that the girl in the mirror is me?

I'm going to tell you the story of a girl
Filled with nothing but darkness,
she's soaked with fear
She cries with as she stands there
Wondering if he really cares
The looking glass holds no temptation
When her world is in devastation
She keeps on looking through the glass
With just enough courage to ask

Shatter me please?
I'm so tired of looking at you and having you stare back at me
I have no will what-so-ever to survive
This is no place for me, it's a nightmare
See me open wide, and hear me scream
Oh why can't you see that the girl in the mirror is me

The world is spinning fast
Yet she just stands there looking in on the looking glass
Knowing her pain will never pass
Until she finds something to last
She raises her fist and suddenly there's a crash
She smiles at you crookedly and broken through the looking glass

Reviews

[WoLf]

Very interesting, almost holds a deeper meaning. I like subtle rhyming too, adds rhythm to the piece.