Anomaly

I am two.

I am one.

 

Scared. Shy. Nervous.

Fearless. Outgoing. Confident.

 

I am inside.

I am outside.

 

Hiding.

Discovering.

 

I am black.

I am white.

 

Alone, isolated.

Extroverted, amicable.

 

(I am two) lucid entities-

Opposites meeting,

Creating.

 

(I am one) complex identity-

Discerning a way to

Belong.

Reviews

[Tommy]

I feel this quite often. Like I am two different people. I suffer from Bipolar, so at times I am up, "Fearless. Outgoing. Confident." Then I go to a down phase and I feel, "Scared. Shy. Nervous." Like two different people living in one body. Great piece!
RLG,
Tommy

[closed]

enjoyed the duality of this work
it makes me want to read it more than once to make sure i havent missed anything

well written

[Living Proof.]

I love this so muchhh !

[Breezie Kae]

I love the simplicity of this poem, and it has a nice vocabulary. :)
I'd also kill to get twelve reviews on a poem that I actually put effort in/didn't write when I was thirteen. XD
Nice job.

[Nae Nae]

I love this piece. Shy, yet fearless. Says so much about how people conflict with themselves on a daily basis...It's excelent!

Nae-Nae...

[SM Davis]

This depicts the dichotomy that all human beings go through during our awkward stages. I liked this very much! A nice awakening to one's self.

[Angel Veselinov]

Very Nice one truly describes how is our world :) + and - :)

[Jeff Miller]

Great flow! Every line beats like a drum, or thumps like the beat of a heart! Keep up the amazing work!

[Tate Morgan]

We are all good and bad nice and mean I think that is where the conscience is seated

[JenLyn]

I feel like this a lot myself. It's a very good poem, you have talent. Keep it up! :)

[Jeff Bresee]

I am with you. Put us together and we'd either make two consistent regular people or we'd just vanish into nothingness like matter hitting anti-matter.

Nice job.