what i want my WORDS to do

i want my words to hang in the air, loom above you, dance in circles around you, never letting you go. i want my words to play endlessly on repeat in your head, my voice to constantly ring in your ears. i want my face to be everywhere you look, seving as a reminder of what lives on in my memories forever. i want you to understand what i see everytime i close my eyes. i want to scream LOOK WHAT YOU'VE DONE TO ME, SO MUCH FOR I'D NEVER HURT YOU BABY. i want you to realize that all those lies you told me still linger in my head. i lay awake at night, doors and windows locked, but still afraid to turn out the light. i want you to see this well-lit dark side of what you've done. i want you to realize that i will never forgive or forget. for the rest of my time, your face will haunt me in my dreams. all i want is my words to make you feel the guilt, for you can never repay me for what you robbed me of.

                                                       

Reviews

[Masq]

What a stirring write!

Your words stirred up so much raw emotion and deep feeling. I felt each word that you wrote as if I was the subject in this piece. This is truly the mark of a great writer! Your story could easily be a poem if put into a poetry format. You express yourself very well. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

Keep writing Melissarose, you do it so well :o)