Reality

Reality

A Poem by Autumn

In my dream, you were with me

My hands and heart full of love

You made me feel like forever

wouldn't be long enough

 

But now I'm in reality

My dream was just a myth

Though you claim to love me

I always feel like s**t

 

© 2011 Autumn


Author's Note

Autumn
I had a dream that I was holding my boyfriend's hands, then obviously, I woke up empty-handed.

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Dreams are meaningful in some way, usually. I used to be a strict dreamaholic and constantly looking up my dreams to find their meaning. Well the poem expresses exactly the meaning of the dream I would believe. I like the line "hands and heart full of love." Very expressive.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I hate my dreams, honestly. I really do. Occasionally I have dreams of being held, then I get this giant slap in the face when I wake up because, hurray, I'm alone. I feel for you here. Good job conveying your feelings, and I liked how short it was because it said a lot in so few words.

I'm sorry that you feel this way. Maybe you should take juero's advice. But, I'm no expert on relationships, so I'll leave that up to you. 100/100 for great meaning.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A sad but good ending...or should I say the end stinks?
This short poem has good form and rythm...
I'll see how some of your others are
keep writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I have had dreams like this a lot. It sucks when you wake up. Its like I want to go back to sleep! Only thing is when you do most of the time you don't get the same dream. =/

Posted 13 Years Ago


If you don't feel good with your BF, it seems like it is time to move on. I realize you are young, but take it from me...Life is too darn short.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aww I love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Autumn
Autumn

Colorado Springs, CO



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