Deception

Sixteen and smiling,
Hoping to believe,
If life is too short to suffer,
Then why do we always decieve?

Author's Note

I wrote this a few months ago, but I really like it. Do you?

Reviews

[fernii]

great poem and such a true sayy within the poem :)

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Love it! Stay sixteen and smiling. I am living proof that life is too short. Great attitude and outlook. Self deception does shorten life. Nice poem.

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

I like the shortness of this poem.. it is straight to the point and really good :p