The Story of You and I

~Miss our Friendship~

It's almost a year gone since our eyes first met

Meeting you is something now I can never forget

There must be something, something about this place

Divine relationship has arisen, which I’ll forever embrace

 

Do you remember when we were first introduced?

We were doing some experiment in that big room

You have gained my attention, without even a try

From there it all began, the story of You and I 

 

We started talking, started knowing each other

You said I hold a good heart, a good character

And I told you, you are nowhere less than this

You were doing wonders on me, so angelic bliss

 

I have never met someone like you, which I was long wishing for

Maybe this is the reason why it never worked with anyone before

We look perfect together, the fact that no one can deny

It was all going perfectly fine, the story of You and I

 

Days have strengthen the holy bond existing between us

A beautiful relationship which is truly build upon the trust

Simple care is the thing what we both were looking for

In this diabolical world full of people with the black lust

 

Everything was going dreamily smooth till that one fine day

When I thought maybe you also feel about me, the same way

Gathering courage to tell what I feel, no longer I can defy

I was wondering if we can take it further, the story of You and I

 

But something I did wrong, that made you feel so bad

Now you're behaving a bit strange, maybe coz you're upset

Things should have not gone this way, now you're thinkin'

Ignoring and keeping a distance, the way your're choosing

 

It's so strange sometimes whatever we do, becomes so minor

All the good things are forgotten, I have become a sinner

Don't get misguided by that tear you are holding in your eye

Everything will become alright, in the story of You and I

Reviews

[Ace D Portgas]

This is a really beautiful poem. I know I say it often but its something people can relate too and like others have said it makes you question the things you have and things you lost throughout your life

I really enjoyed reading this. It makes me think about some friendships of my own

Keep up the good work

[hmm]

amazing rhyme scheme going on, such a emotional write about love, I like it.

[Sagar Waingankar]

Beautiful poem! Well written! I loved each and every part of it. From dawn till dusk! True writer. Keep on your great work! Glad to read such a beautifully crafted poem on a Sunday morning! Completely of simplicity, with good rhythm, flow, everything into it! Thanks for sharing! Love and Light will be there for you all the way. Take care!

[I Cast a Shadow]

Gorgeous. I have nothing else to say. I nearly shed a tear myself, genuinely.

[Demi Rose]

original and lovely. friendship is important and we should consider it carefully.

[Kalpit]

good work.. :)

[Sindhuja Seshadri]

I can so relate to this poem!! Wonderful reading your work~

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WOW, this is amazing, such a beuatiful write.

[Black]

a beautiful catching poem,
which makes us wonder about what we have and what we lost

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aww very cute a sucha beautfiul love! :) a lovely poem with such gorgeous details