Sunrise

Many times, you want to tell me the things,

But words doesn’t seem to find their way out.

Someone must have struck your heart's strings,

And what If that someone is me you're talking about.

 

Even you, yourself can't tell what it is,

You can only tell what it feels like.

I just wonder why are you taking so long,

When we both know what it can be, 

when we both know it feels so right.

 

You're the best actor, I will ever know,

You want to convey something, hidden in words.

And you hide behind the feelings,

That you always refuse to show.

 

Somewhere deep inside your heart,

You must have reserved a place for him.

And he is eagerly waiting for you to tell,

To tell him the things you're holdin' within.

 

Just for once I want you to make me aware, 

Aware of the feelings you are afraid to share.

I'm sure that I can see right through your eyes,

Eyes which are telling me that you surely care.

 

I'm sincerely waiting for that day,

When you will look directly into my eyes.

All the feelings lying deep inside,

You will be able to express,

And our lives will see a new sunrise 

 

Reviews

[DeletedUser]

"Someone must have struck your heart strings" My favorite line, and it definately expresses the deep emotion you express throughout this poem. I also like the natural flow of this poem, and how the words seem to come straight from your heart and into this. This poem was like a sunrise, and hopefully one that everyone sees someday.

[Veronica]

Magnificent!! This poem spoke tremendous volumes. I love it!!

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Oh My this one is really good, I love this, flows so well and so beuatiful.

[Aleyah]

I like this a lot! The first stanza is awesome, it is so intense and really pulled me in. The emotion in this is amazingly clear and also makes the reader feel the same things you do. Awesome ending, too. Amazing poem!!!!

[Ace D Portgas]

Alright I'm diggin' the flow!

The whole poem itself was very good, a pretty, and creative piece of work right here!

Keep it up

[Joe Shetina]

It's absolutely musical. Well done.

[Black]

a well thought poem,
a nice flow and pretty well written

[Miss Marie Riorden.]

I like the flow of this, and it's really pretty. Written well as always (:
Only mistake I read
4th Line: "And what if that someone is me you('re) talking about."