True friend now a stranger

A Poem by fernii

A girl who made friends with a new girl they got on so well then she made friends with her old friend and they friendship went bad.

My life has taken a turn for the worst,

My happy bubble you have burst.

You're better than me,

It doesn't take a genius to see.

You made me feel so comfortable within myself,

You were actually good for my health.

You said I made you laugh everyday,

Since we became friends last may.

I can honestly say,

There is nothing I hate about you anyday.

You know who I truly am,

Other people can't see past my looks and don't give a damn.

You trusted me and I trusted you,

My social life was complete and brand new.

Then I made friends with that mate,

You to others about me you would slate.

We stopped hanging together,

I thought me and my mate were friends forever.

I added lots of weight,

I was then filled with all this hate.

I regret my decision everyday,

The only time we speak is to say hey.

I think about you day in and day out,

May sound weird but we were true friends I have no doubt.

© 2011 fernii

Author's Note

Let me know what you think. This was just something i needed to get off my chest because it was bugging me. :) thanks.

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{A}shley {B}lack @-;-

Firstly I loved the title to this poem then when I read through the flow and structure were spot on with this although at times it seems that you were just trying to make it rhyme rather than talk more about your emotions but that may just be a style so doesn't in any way change the rating which i'm happily going to give
98/100

It would have been 100 but I felt that you could have made it darker giving a deeper insight into the emotions you feel