The world.

A girl standing ontop of a building loooking onto the world. Shes always taken things for granted maybe some time to think will change her.

The wind blowing through my hair,
On this building I stand and stare.

 

The beauty I see before me,
It makes me feel so free.

 

I've never looked at the earth like this before,

I want to stay out here so much more.

 

The pureness of the blue and white sky,

I've always ignored it and I don't know why.

 

The clouds look soft and white,

I've never seen them from this great height.

 

From now on I shall be grateful,

No more shall I be so hateful.

 

This world is not always going to go the way I want it to flow.

This is what I need to think about and learn and know.

 

From here and now on,

I shall love and help everyone.

 

 

 

Author's Note

Let me know what you think :) Thank youu

Reviews

[Alvin L. Kathembe]

we take so much for granted - nature, each other...we only start living when we take a minute to appreciate life. Good job.

[Madison A. Wright]

very nice... its amazing what u see and feel once you step back and look outside of the box.. there is a lot that the world can offer us, we just need to open our eyes...

very nice poem.. thanks for sharing!

[Hannah]

Love it, I comment that on many poems, but I really do I will try next time to write a poem like this it's amazing and just makes me smile reading it (:

[Rose Masen]

Beautiful- a lesson learned. Wisdom gained. Loved it.

[SpokenWord]

Letting go, I see this theme in a few of your poems. This one speaks of the freedom gained from it and gives us a different perspective on how clouds look when your on a natural high from life itself. Well written.