Breakthrough

A girl admitting things to herself and others around her. Shes getting over all the hurt and anger inside of her and torwards others.

I use my smile to hide how i'm feeling,

While my life and heart are slowly healing.

 

I'm learning to let go,

And I'm getting over all this woe.

 

I don't care that you're not here,

You've made you're feelings very clear.

 

I hope you have a nice life,

No more will I pick up this knife.

 

I'm think i'm fine as I am,

For you I no longer give a damn.

 

You can't hurt me anymore,

On you I'm shutting the door.

 

I'm turning over a new page,

And i'm getting rid of all this rage.

 

I want to be filled with happinesss,

I don't want a be a mess.

 

I want to forget about the past,

And move on to the future fast.

 

All of the things I regret,

Will no longer upset,

Me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

This is a major turn over from how I have been feeling recently and I am finally turning over onto a new leaf. I hope you like it. Let me know what you think :) Thanks :)

Reviews

[Deviant Works]

Wonderful, fernii. Truly letting go, refusing to be abused any longer is, in my opinion, a hard obstacle to overcome. The hardest. But once you have made that choice, once you sever your ties what comes next is a beautiful healing process that only makes you stronger. I loved this poem because it shows the emotions one feels at the very end of a path, before stepping onto another. Almost like a final farewell before moving forward. Great, fernii. Many can relate!

[Shardbearer99]

That was really great. When you see sometime people containing a lot of hate and anger within themselves, they don't want to let go it. They linger in the past, not caring about their future. But that's what's different here. The character realised that they wanted more from their life than to live with hate and anger; they wanted to move on. It was very touching and a wonderful poem to read.

[Hannah]

AMAZING is the best word for this poem. I adore it.

[SpokenWord]

The healing process is wonderful once you are reaching the end of it. No more rage, no more feeling at all. Letting go and moving on is so important. I like this poem it is like a freedom anthem, finally able to move on into the future.

[Rose Masen]

This reached so far! It extended relief to others in similar situations. It was amazingly written and whatever experience that caused you so much grief and strife, you sure showed major signs of strength through this write! Fantastic!

[Madison A. Wright]

the flow of this is great, i love all the rhyming along the way. Very emotional and a great poem about getting over something and moving on. wrote with passion. thank you for sharing this.. :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Good for you! This is an excellent poem! Moving ahead is the best way to make a new leaf on life!!

[Moebia]

I love this! :O I can relate so much. I think the only thing I'd change is the line "you've made your feelings really clear". I would change "really" to "very". It doesn't matter much, but just my opinon.

Keep writing(: