Then and Now

Then and Now

A Poem by fernii
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A girl who helped her sister, her sister left and she says how she feels about her.

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I trusted you,

I gave you my heart.

I let my guard down,

We were never apart.

 

I helped you,

I gave you my room.

I let myself get involved,

We were sometimes filled with gloom.

 

I needed you,

I gave you my secret.

I let you in,

We were never in regret.

 

I relied on you,

I gave you my love.

I let you down,

We were never going to fit like a glove.

 

I love you,

You should know that.

No matter how much we fight,

Even when I act like a twat.

 

You moved out,

We hardly ever speak.

I think about you everyday,

Without you I feel weak.

 

I want you to be happy,

That's why I helped you get rid of Joe.

One day I'll see you again,

And I won't feel so low.

 

© 2011 fernii


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fernii
Let me know what you think thanks :)

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awe heartfelt, heart-wrenching, full of emotion...but wrote with a passion. this feeling is the worse! i understand where u are coming from.. im glad that you shared this...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is really sad, but it also speaks love where even after they left you can still help them and have well wishes for them. I really liked this write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So sad, yet strong, and definitely holds it's own! Nice job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is excellent! I have a twin sister and this poem is exactly how I would feel if we stopped speaking!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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