who are you?

who are you?

A Poem by fernii
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a 16 year old girl with a sister who is always annoying.

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Do you actually give a s**t,

Not even just a tiny bit.

I don't know who you are anymore,

And i've felt like this before.

 

All you do day in and day out is hiss,

But what can I do when your my sis.

I have no control over you,

The evidence of that is you have a tattoo.

 

Living with you is like hell,

I just wish you could tell.

Making me miserable is like your mission,

Do you not have any other ambition.

 

I would love to chuck you out,

But to mum you would just moan and shout.

I'm tired of your mood swings,

And you do my head in when you sing.

 

Go ahead call me names,

I may laugh but I feel pain.

If only you knew,

I'm human just like you.

 

Some day I will leave,

No longer will you recieve.

Anything from me,

You'll soon see.

 

 

 

© 2011 fernii


Author's Note

fernii
Let me know what you think :) Thank youu :)

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Love this poem!
Such meaning!
Very powerful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is exactly how I felt when I was 16; only it was directed at society, unknowingly to myself at that moment, but I realized it as I got older. Nice job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem has a lot of emotion but it does show how frustrating your siblings can be I have 5 brothers and a sister so I know how you feel. Keep writing and I know you'll get through it(: great poem(:

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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