I really do love you...

Just a poem about how I feel currently.

I Really Do Love You
I really do love you,           my sweet Likey G.
I want us to-gether,          to-gether at last.
But I fear that won't happen         ,     my a*s shall be kicked
Kicked by a friend that s      intimidated by emotion.
She calls you something,      something you hate
I know you don't like being called that.
I can see us to-gether, hugging in the light,
Not fearing the taunts of the cruel tyrant pricks,
the cold gazes my friend shall deal,
only the love between two love drunk kids.
I think that you like me,
I'm really quite sure.
So if you do love me.
Will you.
Please.
Just ask
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Reviews

[Lauren{Exxii}P.]

Thanks Kon! Not one of my stronger pieces, that's for sure, but thanks! Yeah, it is suppposed to be a heart, I kind of failed :D

[Kon™]

I like how your feelings flowed through to the reader [or at least to me ;)] It was very sad/sorrowful feeling, but with somewhat hope. Great piece. But the structure was confusing, I keep thinking it looks like a heart ;) Anyways, great job! :)