Loss Within

Loss Within

A Poem by Jill Wallflower
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Once again, a love poem...

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I feel a loss within

A hole within my heart

I feel this pain inside me

Whenever we are apart

I wish we could always be togther

Never apart at all

Forever and always

Our love will rise and never fall

I know that this can't happen

This will never be true

But when we are apart

I always feel blue

My heart will laways miss

My heart and my soul

I will always miss you

My heart and my soul

I hope you miss me too

forever and always

i'll miss you and you'll miss me

for the rest of our days

so read this my love

over and over again

© 2011 Jill Wallflower


Author's Note

Jill Wallflower
The quality of this isn't good as I wrote it in 2008.

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This is powerful love, loss of whatever kind is harsh, I can relate! So much emotion within this, beautifully written! xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Jill Wallflower
Jill Wallflower

Sydney, Australia



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I'm Jill 16 Christian :) Bisexual Yeah, I know they disagree but you can't choose who you become Music is my life... Northie, The Never Ever, Dear Dearest, Call The Shots, Because They Can.. more..

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