Unloved

Unloved

A Poem by Hopeless Desire

this hatefullness

& broken trust,
A thousand lies

you've told.
Is killing me with every word

& fast becoming old.
I don't know what

you mean to prove,
or why

you act this way.
You twist my words

& break my heart

with all the games yo play.
There was a time

you looked at me

& love was in your eyes.
But now you focus

all your time

on telling painful lies.
I miss those days

that know have passed,
i wonder what

went wrong.
The one i love

has left me now,

the love that was

is gone.

© 2009 Hopeless Desire


Author's Note

Hopeless Desire
it always happens this way

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Nice flow and rhythm.
Yes, love is painful when there is
only one person giving it and
not receiving nothing back.
Don't worry you'll soon find someone
who is worth all that you have to give.
Thanks for sharing.

Best wishes.


Posted 15 Years Ago


I know this well! been through it not once but twice in 43 years, once after 5 years and then after 16 years. and you never quite get over it. Very real and true write! Good Job!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on March 25, 2009