Trial and Error

Trial and Error

A Poem by Kaitlin

Life is like a science experiment.

In this experiment, there are many trial and errors.

You make a mistake, and try again.

Until you have reached the correct answer.

But what if you can’t find the solution?

And you’re confused, tired, and disheartened.

Do you give up,

Or try again?

© 2010 Kaitlin


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Very interesting and very deep. Only correction I have to make is a slight grammar error

"there are many trial and errors." --------> "there are many trials and errors"

Posted 14 Years Ago


I loved it short but has a meaning the way life is compared to a science experiment is very clever and makes a lot of sense. You have quite a bit of talent. =D

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow grate poem i liked it

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a clever little poem that's going to wrestle inside me for a while still. I enjoyed it but yet the questions are going to be a bit of a flea in my ear, but then I suppose writing is meant to challenge one beyond their limits.

Good job :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like the message in the poem. The answer is we get up and go forward. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


Hmmm Lattanzio would tell us to find the percent error and move on....so that's why shall advice you to do =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I likee.
only sp. error you said do your give up instead of do you give up.
Otherwise so very true. =]

Posted 14 Years Ago



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