The World

this poem describes what is going in the world and all I see is if we keep on killing people the world is going to end and we all won't exsist anymore!

Happy endings
don't exsist...
Love isn't
always true...
Friends aren't
always there...
Life isn't
always perfect...
People aren't
always nice...
Things happen
for no reason...
How can we
live like this?
 

Author's Note

it's impotant

Reviews

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

its pretty but RAWR!! im always gonna be here for ya, ho!!! who's gonna help keep your little sister from driving you crazy?? i'll take care of her for ya. that part about friend not always being there is a LIE when you're talking about us.

[Jacky Bones]

I like the flow
but it seams to kinda just fold on it's self
you forgot the most important part
Hope
hope should be the last thing
cause thats what keeps people going
and it will always be the reason why such terrible things brake down

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

This is true...but in life there is always a positive and negative for everything...well most everything.
Great Job

[*Evelen*]

Very good and meaningful poem. It's all true what you said in your poem. Readers can relate very well to this poem. Nice write, and Good job!

[Alicante lullaby]

VERY BITTER AND VERY TRUE....WHY IS EVERY ONE SO GLOOMY NOW A DAYS.....NICE

[veronica.voodoo]

nice job, it is not exactly my style of poetry but it is still well written nonetheless. Your words really do reflect on how humanity lives today and how life isn't fair. Perhaps you should write a sequel about even though how tragedies befall us everday, there is always something to keep us going? for some of us, it's faith, or family, or perhaps just for the sense of making it. It's your choice. good job, and keep writing. :]
x
veronica

[GoodIntentiionz]

Hmm. Sorry, when I reviewed your poem, you had the poem in the description section, I didn't understand :D

It seems alright. I understand you didn't want to write a long poem? Yeah, sometimes you start writing and you only get it out in a few simple words, it's fine.