Blind

Blind

A Poem by M.S Solis
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Inspired by my disengrating vision

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Groping in the dark.

Finding my way into the light.

Eyes gradually falling into the sinful fog.

A wall stood before me

A wall of traumatically inexplicable and prurient blackness.

Whose dimensions couldn’t be measured.

Seeing beauty itself

with only my cold fingers to feel.

Witnessing colors

with only but my ears to heed.

With a lifetime’s worth of savor

I am left to suffer this gift…

 

© 2009 M.S Solis


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This has to be one of the most heart wrenching and beautiful pieces of writing that I have ever read.
The imagery is very striking and appealing.
"Eyes gradually falling into the sinful fog." - It's not very often when we read something so outstanding.
I simply loved this piece of writing, its very descriptive and beautiful :-)
I will surely add it to my favorites.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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So descriptive... Marvelous imagery as well.
Another great write(:

Posted 14 Years Ago


This has to be one of the most heart wrenching and beautiful pieces of writing that I have ever read.
The imagery is very striking and appealing.
"Eyes gradually falling into the sinful fog." - It's not very often when we read something so outstanding.
I simply loved this piece of writing, its very descriptive and beautiful :-)
I will surely add it to my favorites.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this - the descriptions really paint the picture clearly. I feel like I'm right there in the poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


AWESOME! :D Good Job. I like it =)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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M.S Solis
M.S Solis

Las Vegas, NV



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