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A Poem by M.S Solis
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"Inspired by a friend's life"

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I try to find inspiration when I only see disincentives.
I seek hope when there is only despair.
I hunger for the salvation on the other side but find only downfall.
The heavy shackles on my ankles restrain my movement.
I look up to others soliciting them for aid and assistance but am answered with obstruction and hindrance.
Yet I continue to find myself and the strength to continue...

© 2009 M.S Solis


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I admire those who can make the best out of their lives, even when times are bad, and happiness seems impossible.

Positivity...it's something I spend my days and nights looking for.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Well, that's Life. Full of disappointments, and yet that is the only side we acknowledge. I think that may be a hidden message behind this work. To have the strength to continue is to be aware of the possibility that peace may prevail. This is an excellent piece. Very good job.

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is a brillant, and amazing piece! Great write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very good poem, I can relate to it, that's mostly why I like it... Good job, keep it up!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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M.S Solis
M.S Solis

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