I want

This poem is pointless, but a poem none-the-less...

I want to write a poem,
That spears the readers soul.
One that makes and takes the cake,
One that's really cool.

 

I want to paint a picture,
Of how I see each day.
And hope that I'm accepted,
For what I have to say.

 

I want to build a world,
That's more just than my own.
And I think that I can do that,
By presenting what is known.

 

I want to sing a love song,
Without a single note.
One that floods the readers mind,
But keeps the words afloat.

 

I want to form a bridge,
That extends across the land.
And offers anyone who needs it,
A warm and welcome hand.

 

I want to do it all,
And I want to do it now,
But I have one problem:
I just don't know how!

 

Reviews

[ssgliberty]

i like this poem its inspiring

[tonei]

Yes you do. You just don't realize it.

[Night Personified]

your inspiring :D you make me want what you want

[Wildecat]

I wan't to sing a love song without a single note. this is awesome, thanks for sharing.

[just is]

I want to build a world,
That's more just than my own.
And I think that I can do that,
By presenting what is known.

Love these lines, this is a very touching and beautiful write

[~Qu33n B~]

I love this poem!! Especially this:

'I want to sing a love song,
Without a single note.
One that floods the readers mind,
But keeps the words afloat.'

This is beautiful and of course you'll be accepted for what you have to say. (7-8 lines)

~Qu33n B Cullen~

[Initium]

that was very cute!