Like him

No one made love to me like he did

No one gave me goosebumps

But not like the ones you see in the movies 

My goosebumps grew wings

I flew over everyone with such happiness

Jealousy overcame everyone

They knew why I was happy 

And it ate them all alive 

Yet I still smiled like a child on Christmas morning 

Receiving the one thing he had begged for since last year 

I walked with such grace 

Knowing I could count on someone to be there

Through the good and easy 

To the bad and hard

Also, through the dark and light

He is my sunrise in the morning

Creating a flame that shot through the sky

Waking everyone from their deep sleep 

He is also my sunset at night 

Changing colors but keeping the same purpose

Giving everyone the fate yet beautiful warning

Let night will fall soon

How can I love someone with such fire 

How can someone love me with much more 

I could take a guess but I know 

No one will love me like him

Reviews

[M.A.]

Ah.. this piece is a nice reprieve from all of the sad poems that i have read of late. I enjoyed reading this. I felt the love and passion you weaved in the words. The lines about the sunset spoke to me the most.
I am curious to know though about the like " Let night will fall soon" did you mean "Let night fall soon" if not i would like to know why you put the "will" in that line.
Thank you for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

A hopeful and wonderful poem.
"How can someone love me with much more
I could take a guess but I know
No one will love me like him"
I liked the above lines. Hopeful and positive ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Paul Bell]

I gather by your poem, you like him a lot.
Which i like on a dreary Monday night.
Not enough love about.

[HC Abiona]

that first line.... no one made love to me like he did... literally gave me chills. i love this

[Hebe]

Refreshing. .....you lifted my spirit! :)

[Anjali]

Brilliant poem Nony. I am amazed by your simplicity to express about him the way he liked you no one ever will. Keep on writing more.

[XO Vee]

thanks you very much

[HeyJadeXO]

your feelings really are projected through your writing.I enjoyed reading this piece.

[XO Vee]

thank you so much

[barleygirl]

As most people know about me by now, I hate cliché love poems . . . that being said, I love the imagination & originality crafted into your love poem here. It sprouted wings at the same time your goosebumps did . . . I enjoy the many creative observations about how he makes the narrator feel. There was one spot where I felt you could've dug deeper to give us more of your typical detailed uninhibited joy . . . "good & easy" . . . "bad & hard" . . . "dark & light" . . . (ho hum!) Such descriptions are basically meaningless . . . SHOW ME what this looks like, smells like, feels like, sounds like or smells like! But most of all, the central message rings so true -- we all long for a loved one that really GETS US, which is why I Iove the last line.

[Bala Gorthi]

A very nice poem expressing how it feels when one is bathing in love of someone. Beautifully written. I also have the same curiosity about the let night will fall soon..
The magic of love sprawled everywhere in this poem...
Thank you for sharing and keep writing....

[Valentine]

This sounds like true expressions from the heart. More like statements than prose. Some nice lines. Valentine