*Take me there

*Take me there

A Poem by XO Vee

A long time ago I wished for the deepest of love
I prayed for the best man, inside and out
I hoped for a smile that lit up my life
A warm embrace making me feel at home in the strangest of places
All I wanted was love and I finally encountered what I wanted 
The hugs, kisses, talks, smiles, sweet whispers, short chuckles before a passionate kiss

So why do I still live in fear, that you will walk away
why do I fear theres another who's sharing what I once had to myself
why can't I love you the way you love me 
why can't you love me the way i love you 
Would it make things simpler, would it create an easy life for us

© 2016 XO Vee


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The one that walks away is never ours. The one that is ours will never walk away. I strongly believe in this. When we look at one, only one, it is natural to expect that from the other. That is a girl' perspective.
But I do see some people especially some men who can love more than one.
It is like this , when they see something, something that is equally good or may be better, then they don't mind having it. Men want all but they can't leave something they have to get something else (something here applies to people or things). They don't like making choices and taking decisions. At least a good percentage of people (men) are like that. May be they cannot take a decision that can hurt others.
Well, that is my understanding of things in this regard.
This write is very touching, very well expressing the pain and insecurity associated with love when we are possessed by our love for someone. Both sections are well written.
Thanks for sharing this and keep writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The one that walks away is never ours. The one that is ours will never walk away. I strongly believe in this. When we look at one, only one, it is natural to expect that from the other. That is a girl' perspective.
But I do see some people especially some men who can love more than one.
It is like this , when they see something, something that is equally good or may be better, then they don't mind having it. Men want all but they can't leave something they have to get something else (something here applies to people or things). They don't like making choices and taking decisions. At least a good percentage of people (men) are like that. May be they cannot take a decision that can hurt others.
Well, that is my understanding of things in this regard.
This write is very touching, very well expressing the pain and insecurity associated with love when we are possessed by our love for someone. Both sections are well written.
Thanks for sharing this and keep writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

People always question their place in a relationship. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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