Just take it

Take

my hand

the tears I've cried

my heart

all the times I've tried

to love you

make you stay

Take

my smile

the one that disappeared

like magic

once you appeared

but i loved you

made you stay

Take

the stuff

you gifted me

with love

ha thats funny you see

i hate you

now you leave

Reviews

[aLittlePain]

Oh this is so personally relatable. Some people are oblivious emotionally bankrupt. Strongly expressed piece. R xo.

[XO Vee]

Thank you so much, I'm glad the piece connected with you.

[Chris]

so many don't WANT the heart that's offered - it's always someone else and they seem so impervious to others feeling...

[simpleminds]

You are the gifted writer I see Poems like these tell stories of loss love and romance.

[XO Vee]

Thank you so much for your comments; means a lot knowing I have never posted my poetry and getting such positive feedback makes everything fall into place, I might not have to worry too much when it comes to the writing....THANK YOU