Once upon a time`

Once upon a time

I prayed for a shooting star

Then I made a wish

I wished for his health

I wished for his happiness

I wished for everyone of his wishes to come true

Then as the shooting star shot out of sight 

I slowly closed my eyes and thought 

"Baby I love you"

Once upon a time      

I prayed for a shooting star

Then I made a wish

i wished for her health     

i wished for her happiness     

i wished for everyone of her wishes to come true     

Then as the shooting star shot out of i sight

I slowly closed my eyes and thought

"Baby I love you"

Once upon a time 

They prayed for a shooting star

Then they made a wish

They wished for each others health

They wished for each others happiness

They wished for all of each others wishes come true

Then as the shooting star shot out of sight 

They slowly closed their eyes and thought

"Our love will forever be written in the stars"

Reviews

[grayscale]

i love the different placement of the stanzas it adds a cool effect, i love the content its a very well written poem, i love it, keep it up.

[Valentine]

A very sweet and romantic write. Valentine

[Anushree]

What an marvellous poem written from both lover's perpective.
Amazing :)

[Hebe]

This is my favorite ..... it's full of hope, and it's what everyone wants..... and that's the magic of it, we all see ourselves having this once in our life!

[XO Vee]

Thank you so much; within the darkness I try to find some light

[simpleminds]

Love this Great Write very Romantic upon the stars.

[XO Vee]

Thank you so much. It means a lot !

[Philip Muls]

His, her, and each other. Kindred spirits right?

Well done.

[XO Vee]

thank you !