My River of ^

My River of tears came from you 

now swim in the river you created 

and the slight chance you may breath under water 

choke, not only on the water but the sorrow 

but the pain and heartbreak 

let the salty taste burn holes in you throat 

each burn reminding you of all the pain you caused me 

My River of tears will be your karma

and once you realize how that river came to be 

i hope it haunts you in your dreams

causing your body to shake and send shivers to your spine

waking you from your slumber 

giving you that aching burn in your chest

making you feel like you're suffocating 

but the person is hesitating 

making sure you feel everything 

I want you to know, I've been there done that

my pain has come and gone 

but your dose hasn't even started yet. 

Reviews

[simpleminds]

Traveling Pain out side his brain will he ever realize it he was the cause of the break up and that your pain was heart deep. His pain will only start after he realize that your are gone for good that he will understand the pain he caused was made from a grown man.

[XO Vee]

That was powerful, I'm so happy you find it in you to read through my pieces and connect.

[Valentine]

You have some very good lines in this one. Valentine

[Muse]

You clearly write out of pain and life experience. Life is like a river. After reading through all of your poems I can only hope that some day your river finds a happy place. I really did enjoy reading you.

[XO Vee]

No matter how much good, sometimes bad follows right behind it! I write to get it out! thank you for reading!

[Coyote Poetry]

I do believe in karma.
"My River of tears will be your karma
and once you realize how that river came to be
i hope it haunts you in your dreams
causing your body to shake and send shivers to your spine
waking you from your slumber "
I pay for bad deeds often and I learn. All good and bad deeds will come back to us. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[XO Vee]

Thank you so much for your input! i love to hear other peoples side of what they feel when they read my poetry. Thank you once again for taking the time

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Hebe]

Amazing! you can feel the revenge! Hi Noni, just started reading your work... it's raw and real!
First 2 lines really capture everything!

[XO Vee]

Thank you so much

[Chris]

a discerning rant with memorable teeth. I've heard curses without near as much "bite"...

[XO Vee]

Anyone can curse, but only some can "bite" with words of such structure !

[Chris]

Chuckling here... you've a "Master's" whisper and grace.