Lonely Girl

its a poetry on a girl that commits suicide due to be all alone in pain and misery

She sits there dying in snow

No one will notice, no one will know

Her heart withers and dies 

No one hears the pain she cries

All alone in the dark winter night 

She keeps hoping her wings will spread to take flight

Now nearly forever asleep

She lays alone and begins to weep 

Death has snatched this lonely girl away

No will notice, no one will know that the lonely girl won't be here for another day 

Reviews

[Shane Mohamed]

Suicide robs so many youngsters of their lives. Depression and loss of confidence are horrible things. In this age that we live in, not many have the time to listen, and the ones that will, you have to pay them to do so. I honestly don't know what this world has come to. If you know someone who's troubled, all you have to do is listen. Just listen.

[wordman]

life is tough,and sometimes un fair,it looks if people really don`t care
and I`m not sure they do