Mistaken

Shortest chapter so far, wrote it really quickly.

Two girls stepped out of the shadows as soon as Brenna fell asleep.

“You take the girl, I'll trace the other.” The first girl with smooth pale white skin and topaz colored eyes said before racing back into the dark forest, where shrieks from night creatures could be heard coming deep with thin.

 

The second girl only nodded once and picked up the bleeding girl and carried her deeper into the woods. “She must be dead...” she thought aloud.

 

But she could hear her heart beating strongly deep with thin her body, and her blood smelling better to her by the minute.

Author's Note

Ignore spelling/grammar, sorry for the shortness of it.

Reviews

[Kevin Vorshak]

Again, this chapter is way too short and doesn't further anything. In the previous chapter, Brenna fell asleep with them watching her. So why question if she were dead or not? Who is the other person/thing being followed?