New Faces

New Faces

A Chapter by Obsessive Love
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Third Chapter in Chaska. Longer than the others.

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Hey Nikki, I think shes coming back! Is the first words Chaska heard before opening her eyes, and revealing two very pale girls, one with stunning ice blue eyes and black hair and the other with shocking blue hair and deep burgandy colored eyes. Chasta gasped when she saw them. "Who are y'all?" She asked breathlesly. The blue eyed girl laughed a musical laugh and replied, "Belladonna Cruz" and nodded towards the other girl she replied "Nikolia Bennett." Chaska stared at them for a minute before realizing that it was them she had smelled. She coughed and sat up. "Wait. We want to know who you are." Nikolia said as she put a ice cold hand on Chaska's sholder. "Chaska" She slowly replied. Chaska whoo?! Belladonna prodded. Chaska took a deep breath and replied "Hakidonmuya" the named Chaska had given herself a long time ago when she seperated herself from her parents. She had never used it - and never planned to. "Hm. Beautiful name. Lots of meaning." Belladonna mused.
The three were silent staring at each other for the longest time until finally, Nikolia broke the silence. "How long have you been a werewolf Chaska?" "H-h-how did you know?" Chaska stuttered. "We've been watching you." Belladonna simply responded. "W-watching me? Why? How?" Chaska blubbered confused. "Well, I could see us with you several years ago" Nikolia replied. Belladonna rolled her eyes and glared at Nikolia and responded
 "What she means is, we saw you and thought that you were very different than the 
other wolfs-" "We saw that you were a loner, which is different." Nikolia cut in. "Oh..." Chaska managed to add. Chaska tried once more to break away from Nikolia's ice cold hold on her, but failed. "Answer us." Nikolia pressed. "I-I don't know." Chaska finally said after a moment of silence. Belladonna exchanged a look with Nikolia before finally saying, "How can you not know, I know exactly how long I've been a v-" a sharp jab in the ribs and a stony glare by Nikolia stopped her from going on with what she was saying. "I just don't know is all." Chaska added fiercly. Suprised by her sudden anger, she jumped up in a attempt to leave. This time Nikolia just sat back, and did not try to stop her. Chaska stared at the two girls until she finally ran to the oppisite side of the cave, in a attempt to leave the smell.


© 2008 Obsessive Love


Author's Note

Obsessive Love
This chapter is longer than the others, sorry if its boring. Ignore grammar and spelling.

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its not boring ,i can see you are building more on this ,so she meets some vampires too,its getting exciting,i think you should go on with it ,you have a lovely style in writing and a true story teller,i think your imagination is wild and this story could go on to be a pretty one,i did love it till now ,wonderful writing...

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Truly enjoying your writea, captivating me. Can't wait to read more....thank you!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its not boring ,i can see you are building more on this ,so she meets some vampires too,its getting exciting,i think you should go on with it ,you have a lovely style in writing and a true story teller,i think your imagination is wild and this story could go on to be a pretty one,i did love it till now ,wonderful writing...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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