Stress

there are no words to describe this.

Sorry if I must confess

lies, tries, failed denies,

breaking under this distress,

I cheat, defeat, it's incomplete.

Falling 'part, I can't deny,

no sleep, weep, I've fallen deep.

Don't know how to climb back,

out, doubt, I've tried to shout!

Out of energy, out of mind,

same pain, I can't explain,

I'm breaking out of endless stress,

much less, confess,

I must regress.

Depressed,          pOsSeSsEd,

I can't

express.

Oh, why oh why, did I say yes?

I think

I'm under

stress.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Floornine]

This poem definitely portrays stress as your format is very short and choppy giving the reader an intense feeling while reading it. I think you might want to work on the rhyme scheme and maybe take out some of the font changes because they could be taking away from the piece. I like that I can sense the emotion and the personality in it though.