Crush

chill. don't get so mad. just chill. [rhyme poem]

Don't lose control, just keep your cool

it's fine, don't fret, do what you do.

Don't need your tears, don't need your hugs,

I'm fine, you're fine, don't crush the bug.

 

You see my story ends right here

it doesn't bite, it doesn't fear,

it doesn't try to change it's route,

then I think I've lost and--shoot!

 

Hey!  Stop.  Let it drop.

Don't bring me in this, let it rock.

Don't try to start a fight with me

'cause I'm late for lots of things, you see?

 

Hey, cool it down.  Turn that frown right upside down.

Don't lose control, just keep your cool.

Don't make a huge commotion, fool.

 

Just stop.  Don't f**k

around with me.  
Don't you see who I want to be?

Just chill.  Don't kill.

Don't crush the bug.

Just change your ways

don't act so smug.

 

Then you get mad and--stop!

I think your fucked!

I think your way out-lucked!

Just stop!  Let it drop.

Let it waves move

and rock.

Let it roll, let it jump,

til it hits another bump.

Then the waves get all

quiet and it's cool.

And it's cool.  So stop acting like a fool.

 

Let the waves do their thing.

Let the birds sing and sing.

Let the skies change their ways.

Just remember, we all have those days.

 

Reviews

[KUFU]

A fun, whimsical poem. I don't understand the title though. Why Crush? Is this the crush of life you speak of? Or the quick paced tempoed rhythm you adopt with this piece? Feelin the rhyme scheme. Got a little choppy with the meter though, but hey--chill. don't get so mad. just chill. This one almost went to my FAVS.